Kool
Lil loopy for my taste... id say cut it up a bit and throw a hook in there
this is a great track overall
Awesome guitar usage
and its quick to spit on.
thats good. =)
Aight man.
stay up!
PEace!!!
~Rymix
Kool
Lil loopy for my taste... id say cut it up a bit and throw a hook in there
this is a great track overall
Awesome guitar usage
and its quick to spit on.
thats good. =)
Aight man.
stay up!
PEace!!!
~Rymix
It was made for some mixtape shit originally...
But it loops alot not intentionally.
I smoke weed lol I make dumb mistakes sometimes....
But at like 1:30 the whole beat switches up if you listen all the way through
ey bro.
I just finished my verse for this song... 0.o people thought "Revelation" was hot? lol....... just wait. ;) this one is named after our group name. to decribe us. every rapper needs a group name song. ^___^ the title is.... "AftyrLyfe".... its as epic as your beat. =) great beat btw its perfect for our lyrics. aight man i'll hit u up. in a pm when we finish. PEace!
~Rymix
B4 u submit it
give me the track
[Kiss Our Ass] team member also did a song to it
ill mix em together
wuts up man!
this piece is one of your best. =) sounds like a video game hip hop mixed song. =) its pretty cool. smooth flow for lyrics... Great piano. If i wasnt so swamped with music i'd luv to get on this. ^__^ I'd say for a good impact to the listener.
do a drop in the middle but keep the melody going. then bring it back strong. that always makes me go like... (DAMN!) lol... just my opinion. aight bro. keep makin em.
PEace!!!
~Rymix
Hey, RemixF2D!
Thanks for the review, a drop in the middle is a great idea, I can imagine a great new melody which could go on that in the quiter part. Thanks!^^
Aight aight!
Good quality, Smooth flow. Great subject. Sounds awesome bro.
all i'd say is hook sounds like verse's (volume wise) sooo i dunno mabie thats your thing? lil effect on the hooks? mabie like a crowd sound? cause thats a crowd banger. overall hot. keep flowin . PEace!!
~Rymix
Appreciated fam, I'm actually re-recording this to sound more hype. The chorus (in certain parts) needs to sound like there's a crowd screamin' the lyrics, so I know exactly what you mean. Give me...hell, I don't know about three weeks tops. I'll have this re-recording and two new tracks to post up.
Stay up fam,
Nimbus The General
Woot. thx bro! ;)
U will be pleased. We are gonna rip this one.
i'll hit u back with a pm when its done..... Time to go to work on this.
PEace!!
~Rymix
np man, happy that you like it
Yo. 5/5 10/10
The beat is sick.... i'd luv to use this for my single. thx bro.
~Rymix
as i wrote in description i am going to up the beat itself too
(when you use it please let me hear the result;)
Dood!
Great beat! luv it. The flow a bit off. i read the lyrics and they are great. good message. yo check your pm im sending u somthing. PEace!
~Rymix
ight
10's n 5's
Yup yup. Hot stuff bro. Ima play with this one a bit. see what i can lay on it. ;) aight man be easy! PEace!!!!
~Rymix
Hey man Thanks :)
Amazing.
K-DM, for real... we'd be honored to rip this one. u be the judge. and let us kno. we'll put everything into it and 4 hours at the studio at 45/hr. ;) Great ending... fades out.... awesome song all together... Rymix n Ryder Gives it 2 thumbs up five star rating. 5/5 10/10 your gonna be on that (Best tracks ever) list. Just wait. i'll vote u every day if i have to. =P aight man. think about the offer. and we'll catch u later. PEace!!!!
~Rymix
Kool.
Thats a different sound ;) Good hit bro! =) Keep makin em.
I cant really review much on this, i have no idea whats good and bad on classical... =P but it sounds good to me! =) aight bro. PEace!!!
~Rymix
Hey sounded good is all that counts in the end, right. Thanks for reviewing Rymix. ^_^ I'm just glad I finished it. I scrap far too many ideas. Anyways, Love, Peace, and Big Beat.
Two Minds, Two Voices, Two Styles, One way of life...AftyrLyfe.... Ryder, and Rymix Bring a new sound to Hip-Hop with Originality Focused to the Fans and the Music with their own Lyrics combined to bring you a sound you've never heard.
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