wuts up man!
this piece is one of your best. =) sounds like a video game hip hop mixed song. =) its pretty cool. smooth flow for lyrics... Great piano. If i wasnt so swamped with music i'd luv to get on this. ^__^ I'd say for a good impact to the listener.
do a drop in the middle but keep the melody going. then bring it back strong. that always makes me go like... (DAMN!) lol... just my opinion. aight bro. keep makin em.
PEace!!!
~Rymix