bass line
need some more to your bass line.... and spred it out a bit... sounds a bit bunched up. Skipped alot.... i dunno if thats what u intended... but mabie not do that. ;) good tune for your background. im feelin it... just build a lil more structure around it, get a bit more organized and it'll be a sick hit. Aight then (always a pleasure) PEace!!!
~Rymix