Good move.
Aight, hot cut bro. mmm sometimes the beats takes over. drop the music volume a bit. dont mess wit your verse volume. it sounds on point. just bring the music down. Try not to squeez lyrics to close together, it'll give us a jumbled up sound. Just let it flow ;) Aight man hope i was able to help a bit. Great song over-all.
keep makin em. Great potential. PEace!
~Rymix